Interim Feedback - Group Critique
"Unlock Your Life"
- 'You are the key'
- the lock needs to be locked, rather than unlocked- stronger message
"Feeling Trapped"
- he becomes part of the computer
- gets sucked in to the screen/computer
- side view/face pressed against the screen
"Shell"
- snail shell? - 'Catch up with your life' - new possible tagline
- social media : is the crab grabbing the shell
- something that grabs away the person, having a life...
"Sore Thumb"
- Cross out 'sore thumb' - too obvious
- address the heading without the tagline
- specify the idea of 'online maintenance'
So overall, the group decided that the 'shell' image and 'lock' image were the two strongest ideas/concepts and that I should use those to develop further.
At this point, I think I will choose the "shell" concept to develop as my final.
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